Thursday, 7 May 2015



The bright,beautiful sun shines down on us
As the grass was as green as a fresh lime
The happy flowers dance in the lovely breeze
I can see children playing happily in the warm sun
WOOO as the wind blows
As the tall trees with the lovely bright green leaves 

I used smilies because I haven't used smilies before and I thought it was about time to use that feature.
I used personification because I think it makes the poem more interesting.
I used alliteration because i think it makes the poem stand out.
I used onomatopoeia because I wanted to add some more out there words in my poem.

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