Wednesday, 25 June 2014


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So What:This is quality writing because I have done punctuation where the .,?!' Should be.I have achieved Vocabulary because I used a lot of technical words to show what has happened and feel how it's shaking affected the city.
Now What:I need to work on my organisation a bit more because it doesn't look tidy enough.
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